Let’s talk about Act III. The ending. What some people claim to be the most important part!
Break into three: (external and internal conflict combine for the solution)
I wouldn’t say that the external and internal storylines combined here but they do later. I knew Act III started when her and her mom have a pow wow to make plans with one day left!
Finale: (the climax)
I loved the climax of this book. I’ll just say that Sherry meets the ghost one on one in a graveyard to “catch” him. The climax was everything it should be: suspenseful and emotional.
The cool emotional stuff that really sold me on this book is what made the climax though. Sherry gives the ghost some real time with his sister.
And then, she makes the biggest self sacrifice of all. She realizes that she talks to her mom on and off, where her brother doesn’t at all. So she gives up her 5 minutes that she’s been working toward and gives them to her brother! I was bawling. And honestly, it made this book rise to the top!
Final Image: (Opposite of the opening image)
In the final couple chapters, everything comes full circle. Sherry is respecting the Ruler. She’s being more accepting of her best friend’s boyfriend choices. And she has grown by giving up her real time to her brother.
Best ending ever for this story.
What worked for me?
- Personal conflict was tied to the mystery
- Personal motivation to solve the mystery
- Character arc
- Hilarious cute voice
- Sherry became an extremely likeable character with her self-sacrifice.
Have you read any stories lately with an ending you loved and you knew you’d read the next one?