Perfect timing for me. I’m in final revisions and letting my eyes go cross-eyed as I work on my query.  My two sentence pitch is below, feel free to comment on it. And then click over to Steena Holmes’ blog to check out the others!

Thirteen-year-old Joseph Fiasco must solve the 1990 Gardner Museum Heist of paintings worth 500 million dollars to keep his dad out of jail, but each trip back in time to the crime scene screws with life in the present. Fiasco hits bottom when he realizes that he controls the fate of the people he loves – and he can’t save them all.

And listening to the feedback so far, here is my one liner.

Thirteen-year-old Joseph Fiasco must solve the 1990 Gardner Museum Heist to keep his dad out of jail, but each trip back in time to the crime scene screws with life in the present until he must choose between his family and friends – and he can’t save them all.

So, let me know which do you like better?

And thanks!